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SANGSUE-ELLE

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Contest: lndfrance.deviantart.com/journ…
Theme: "Sensu-Alité"
2nd place ! :star:

EN:
Title: Puns between "leech" and "she" for making the word "sensual" in French.

I wanted approach the theme "Sensu-Alité" putting myself in the shoes of a rich man who wants to own the "love of his life" with money. He tries to forget his loneliness and his inability to be able to buy the girl of his dreams. I tried to make the prose and making puns. I hope some of you will appreciate! Good reading!

"I had been warned of the poison of her lips and the softness of her skin.
Shapes of her body replaced the drought of her soul and that was enough.
We had told me that this girl would probably be there by chance, one that would hurt my good.
You see, the beautiful succubus who gave her body to the poor mortal that I am, and who unfairly lost his heart to become her thing-money.
Again, yes, again, give to me more, beautiful blonde to the body arched.
Give me your time against some of my money.
I want to have a moment of your beauty for forget my ugliness.
I want to feel my hands on your breasts to hear your heart beat.
I did more than that - you - to feed my passions.
I will again tonight sweet dreams. You're mine, beautiful dream.
My beautiful, my princess, my "sangsue-elle". "

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FR:
Je voulais abordé le thème "Sensu-Alité" en me mettant dans la peau d'un homme riche qui souhaite posséder l'"amour de sa vie" par l'argent. Il tente d'oublier sa solitude et l'impossibilité pour lui de pouvoir s'acheter la fille de ses rêves. J'ai tenté de faire de la prose en faisant des jeux de mots. J'espère que certains d'entre-vous apprécierons! Bonne lecture!

"On m'avait prévenu du poison de ses lèvres et de la douceur de sa peau.
Les formes de son corps remplaçaient la sécheresse de son âme et cela me suffisait.
On me l'avait dit que cette fille-là serait sans doute là par hasard, celle qui ferait du mal à mon bien.
Voyez-vous la belle succube qui a donné son corps au pauvre mortel que je suis, et qui a injustement perdu son coeur pour en devenir sa chose-à-fric.
Encore, oui, encore, donne-en moi plus, belle blonde au corps cambré.
Donne-moi encore de ton temps contre un peu de mon argent.
Je veux posséder quelque instant ta beauté pour oublier ma laideur.
Je veux sentir mes mains sur tes seins pour entendre le battement de ton coeur.
Je n'ai que plus ça - toi - pour nourrir mes passions.
Je ferai ce soir encore de beaux rêves. Tu es à moi, belle chimère.
Ma belle, ma princesse, ma sangsue-elle."

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DenzelAJackson's avatar
This is quite pretty, nice work.